Poem I wrote, Hope u like it
 

Just a poem I wrote, hope u guys like it,



Undeserved


A tree holding penance undeserved by all
Many deny but still they fall
Loving them still he calls their name
Refusing Him still refusing He came
Searching for love overlooking its creator
Still not knowing what they live for
They cry to man but what does he feel
All that’s inside just seeking to heal
Just seeking to rest in all that’s right
Wanting to hold on just wanting one light
Maybe someday they’ll find all they need
And see there’s a reason he came to bleed
Not coming for self but in love for all
Bringing us closer to hear his call

hmmm...very deep..love reading what you write..keep up the good work..

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Great Poem Sam! I Like Your Work :)

I always love your poems Sam:angel: That one was very good and touching to me:P Thanks for sharing it!

Sam, I think you don't need to know what I think about this one (or all your poems actually): superb, it's called "litote" in french, your poems are concise, small but still they say so much, very meaningful....
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Very good!!!

very nice!

What's so good?:D

The poem was good...hello:rolleyes:

Very deep, but well written. Good job!

Take Heed that YE not despise not one these littie ones for i say unto you that in heaven their angels do always behold the face of my father which is heaven for the son of man came to save that which was lost .....so it is not the will of the father which is in heaven that one of littie ones should perish for thouse of you who have been cut down by thouse who thout themeselfs......holier then tho thay shall be cut down .....for you our the greaset in the kingdome of GOD....MATT>18>10

:wtf: ^

Sam I loved your poem as usual it was awesome.

sam Iliked your poem now try this one now know I that the lord Saveth His Anointed he will Hear him From his holy heaven with the saving Stength of his right hand THEY are brought down fallen but we our risen and stand up right WE may rise n fall but t IN the end will meet again LET THE KING HEAR US WHEN WE CALL

it's time for you to shut the f*ck up :lol: