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Sam16 05-21-2003 06:07 PM

Yeah, beleive it, another poem
 
Deceit Inside


A giving heart is bruised again
Just wanting to see good in all men
But not all men seek what is right
Many have fallen away and lost sight
Regretting he tried his heart grows dim
All he sees now is another mans sin
Never again will he open his heart
For all that’s in it has faded to dark
The good in him was killed by another
Something so sacred is lost forever
He tried to hold on but couldn’t be touched
Deceit in this world is just to much
So maybe you’ll think before you deceive
For what can deceit ever achieve

SmEeKy 05-21-2003 08:18 PM

thats a real good poem I love it, and all that u said is real true

Sam16 05-21-2003 09:52 PM

thanks SmEeKy :)

JulieCitySlicker 05-22-2003 01:19 AM

Yet again another awesome poem Sam:P I really enjoy reading your poems:) Thanks for sharing them with us!

Hotdoggie 05-22-2003 05:34 AM

Sam I gotta tell ya, you're gifted, you're probably the only one who can describe what's inside of me...
"Although the names change
Inside we're all the same
Why can't tear down the walls?
And show the scars we're covering"
Everybody's saying they're special, original, that they can never find someone like themselves...Why can't we open our eyes and see the truth?? We humans have the same emotions but we react to certain situations differently!!!!!!
We all felt hate in our lives, it's true to different things but the most important thing we felt the same emotion, does anybody here know what I mean??? maybe I'm just talking crazy.....

Redeemer 05-22-2003 09:53 AM

Nah, Hotdoggie, you're not talkin' crazy at all!! I think I get it. :D
Great poem Sam. It kinda reminds me of one of my songs, When Angels Fall.

SmEeKy 05-23-2003 01:35 AM

I feel what u are saying, hotdoggie


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