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Yeah, beleive it, another poem
Deceit Inside
A giving heart is bruised again Just wanting to see good in all men But not all men seek what is right Many have fallen away and lost sight Regretting he tried his heart grows dim All he sees now is another mans sin Never again will he open his heart For all that’s in it has faded to dark The good in him was killed by another Something so sacred is lost forever He tried to hold on but couldn’t be touched Deceit in this world is just to much So maybe you’ll think before you deceive For what can deceit ever achieve |
thats a real good poem I love it, and all that u said is real true
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thanks SmEeKy :)
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Yet again another awesome poem Sam:P I really enjoy reading your poems:) Thanks for sharing them with us!
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Sam I gotta tell ya, you're gifted, you're probably the only one who can describe what's inside of me...
"Although the names change Inside we're all the same Why can't tear down the walls? And show the scars we're covering" Everybody's saying they're special, original, that they can never find someone like themselves...Why can't we open our eyes and see the truth?? We humans have the same emotions but we react to certain situations differently!!!!!! We all felt hate in our lives, it's true to different things but the most important thing we felt the same emotion, does anybody here know what I mean??? maybe I'm just talking crazy..... |
Nah, Hotdoggie, you're not talkin' crazy at all!! I think I get it. :D
Great poem Sam. It kinda reminds me of one of my songs, When Angels Fall. |
I feel what u are saying, hotdoggie
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