Keeping it simple
 

Re: Keeping it simple
 

:) very venting and reflecting and all that stuff

Re: Keeping it simple
 

:)

Re: Keeping it simple
 

well from the start to the ending all i can say it was very very very well written nothing not a thing was missing from that piece as HARDCORE as it was it ended real simple Ok :) just perfect

Re: Keeping it simple
 

thank u!

Re: Keeping it simple
 

:D yes i thought it could use good feed back..

Re: Keeping it simple
 

as do all good poems.

Re: Keeping it simple
 

yes indeed my point excaltey you,ve got some good potery going on worth elboarating

Re: Keeping it simple
 

heh, i would someday like to start a band. but i dunno if i sound good when i sing. i really just wan't to get these, "songs", out there. I call them songs, i write them with the music in mind.

Re: Keeping it simple
 

thats the way i write to the music is always in the head always someday i may to haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa my friend its a big part of my life but not a lot of room for it if that makes any sense

Re: Keeping it simple
 

it makes perfect sense. i know exactly what you mean.

Re: Keeping it simple
 

thanks for understanding man here latley i,ve been on a roll got it in my head have,nt a lot of time to even put stuff to paper

Re: Keeping it simple
 

hmmmm, try carrying around a small note pad. the size that fits in your pocket. so when somthing just comes to you, you can just quckly write it down and put it back in your pocket, to finish it later. just some advise - i do it.

Re: Keeping it simple
 

i do but normally i have a complexty i have a tendies when i start something i just cant give 25 percent of it and get to the rest later i gotta give 100 percent all the time, the same thing when wrting down lyrics now if it real good oh you bet your fanny i,ll write it on my jeans if i have to haaaaaaa

Re: Keeping it simple
 

yes, i've experienced that to. maybe just try to clear your scheduel up a bit? that might help, if you can.