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Rulesdontapply 07-15-2004 07:11 PM

No End
 
The point in this one is shaded and could really be anything but i thought u might like it anyway.

Don’t stumble!
You have to get up!
Keep running and you will be ok
We get a little bit further every day
But we have to keep moving!
Although my legs are weak and the pains consuming
My heart is racing and these thoughts confusing
But I still know I can win this race
Although I stumble and I cant keep their pace
There are so many stronger that don’t even place
And even they seem so far by now
I want to win but I don’t know how
And while thinking these thoughts the assurance set in
That I’ll never make it further than this
Iv stumbled here again
I’m not strong here and I can never win
I made it nowhere and I will never see the end
So I suppose I wasn’t meant for this race
I’m not meant to be here in this place
And even though I don’t know where I should go
I know its not here
There is nothing left to gain
There are so many things left to fear
The only thing left for me is to move on
Its been far to long
Its time to move on

HR2004 07-15-2004 07:25 PM

very good i like alot and your right about moving on but sometimes its like the hardest thing for me to do but anyways that was really good.

creedsister 07-15-2004 11:21 PM

That was Awsome I was really in to the opening Thank you Rules For Another HomeRun :jam: :jam:

cjme 07-16-2004 09:51 PM

wonderful poem


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