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HR2004 03-02-2005 12:56 AM

First kiss
 
A simple way...
So they say...
A way to show...
Show a person cares...
A kiss shares...
More than just pleasure.
You cant begin to measure.
The connection starts here.
With the simple kiss...
The first kiss special.
The kiss remebered by both...
Even when they grow old.
The memory of the first kiss...
Stays fresh.
Always linked in this special way.
Remembering that day as if it were...
yesterday.
The kiss...the first kiss.
Stays forever on the lips.
The soft touch sits on the cheeks.
So you see.
When you kiss...
It means more than what you think.
It forever lays with you.
Night and day you'll have a replay.
A happy replay of the first kiss.
I wish too kiss you...be the first one...
Who connects with your lips.
Always being linked with you.
Forever and always my kiss awaits you.

creedsister 03-02-2005 01:25 AM

:jam: :jam: :jam: Cool liked it

Ann Allusion 03-02-2005 02:36 PM

*sigh* :o ...enjoyed reading that...

HR2004 03-02-2005 05:04 PM

thank you both!

revisfoot 03-02-2005 06:27 PM

That was really good. I'm actually writing a speech for my public speaking class about the history of the romantic kiss. :D We had to pick an informative topic, so I figured this one would be most fun. Besides, I can also ask for a volunteer to help me demonstrate the "freedom" kiss ;)

creedsister 03-02-2005 09:25 PM

:wtf: history HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA please let me know how it goes :roll: :roll:

aussiecreeder 03-03-2005 01:12 AM

nice work! :)

Anna1011 03-03-2005 05:10 AM

nice, really liked it!

HR2004 03-03-2005 01:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by revisfoot
That was really good. I'm actually writing a speech for my public speaking class about the history of the romantic kiss. :D We had to pick an informative topic, so I figured this one would be most fun. Besides, I can also ask for a volunteer to help me demonstrate the "freedom" kiss ;)

LOL that sounds very interesting i would like to hear how it goes as well.
Thank you all for your kind words!!

revisfoot 03-03-2005 04:54 PM

Well, I really did enjoy your work. Please, continue sharing! And, yes, I'll let you know how the speech goes. I wrote out a manuscript, and I must say, it is QUITE humorous.

HR2004 03-03-2005 05:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by revisfoot
Well, I really did enjoy your work. Please, continue sharing! And, yes, I'll let you know how the speech goes. I wrote out a manuscript, and I must say, it is QUITE humorous.


Im glad you did and i will continue sharing and i cant wait too hear about the speech!!

revisfoot 03-03-2005 06:54 PM

I'll e-mail you my manuscript so yuo can read it. What's your e-mail addy?

HR2004 03-03-2005 08:29 PM

thank you again Umm my email address is [email protected]


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