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Bleeding Love 08-10-2006 01:40 AM

De Muerte a Infierno
 
De Muerte a Infierno

such sickening scene
better left to be unseen

hail to the king of immorality
encouraging our abnormality
like an action without reaction
like joy without satisfaction
breach the barriers of our inner most being
halt the eyes of the things we are not seeing

open yourself wide
see what's inside

hold my hand as we walk through this hell as one
as we burn in the depths, no longer seen by the Son
with a lack of understanding and the courage to move on
where hope has been banished and all love has been withdrawn

we may no longer be bound by the ties
of human juristdiction
but our eyes still reflect upon our demise
and our affliction.

J-Man 08-10-2006 11:20 AM

Re: De Muerte a Infierno
 
I like your style Bleeding Love. You should think about being a songwriter.

Bleeding Love 08-11-2006 02:50 AM

Re: De Muerte a Infierno
 
Thank you much. I have and hope to make it was one :)

Rocketqueen 09-02-2006 11:35 PM

Re: De Muerte a Infierno
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Bleeding Love
Thank you much. I have and hope to make it was one :)

Lovley Poem Love It But could you explain the Title De Muerte A Infierno:confused:

Bleeding Love 09-06-2006 05:18 PM

Re: De Muerte a Infierno
 
From Death Into Hell is the title.

Rocketqueen 09-07-2006 12:00 AM

Re: De Muerte a Infierno
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Bleeding Love
From Death Into Hell is the title.

:) OK

StappsSaviour 09-07-2006 07:33 PM

Re: De Muerte a Infierno
 
i really like that one...and the way that u change from the rhyming line by line then every second and yea its great.

Bleeding Love 09-07-2006 10:15 PM

Re: De Muerte a Infierno
 
Thank you much.


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