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not finished yet but i thought id share.


Another phone call that’s unreturned
Another side of my pride is burned
Cant you see that this hurts
From the kiss you pushed away
You don’t even need to say
Because ill say it first
I am so sick of this place
I cant stand my own face
And I hate that this hurts
I hate that I’m open
While You don’t even see how much you mean
How far in you’ve seen
I miss you
And I should do nothing but forget you
But I cant
So I’m left to wonder
Because Iv been replaced with another
What’s left that we can possibly be
Did you even leave any of me?
But the pain reminds me you didn’t
That we didn’t make it
And this will kill me

I liked it i dont know what to call it ;) :jam: :jam:

very emotional writing...a thought...what do you think of "I've Always Known"...

:D that would be a nice one :jam:

That was a really good poem.How about "This really hurts" or "I'll miss you"
tell me what cha think.that poem again rocked :bow:

I like "Ill miss you" , feels right. and thanks for the kind words :)

your welcome and thanx