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creedsister 03-08-2005 11:01 AM

Swept
 
Swept Away By The Dive I Took In The Ocean Before I Dived I was Caught and swept away Before I Closed My Eyes Ready To Take the Dive As I waited To Fall In The Rapid Plunge When I opend My eyes I was Swept Away And Never Felt The Plunge Of The Dive The Water Is High I cant Swim But I dive Anyway Only To Get Swept Away And Hear Your Voice Caught up and swept by just a small sweep of you,re saving stregnth is more rapid that the rushing tide below swept away by the dive i took in the ocean before i dived i was caught and swept away before i closed my eyes ready to take the dive i waited to fall in the rapid plunge below when i opend my eyes i was swept away and never felt the impact of the plunge I cant swim but i took the dive anyway only to get swept away and hear your voice caught up and swept away By just a small sweep of you,re saving stregnth is more rapid than the rushing tide below higher than any mountian Higher Than all heaven and all earth swept away in sweet rapture of power that shows thy self by power of mercy divine so i walk the line Swept In The Midst Of A Free Fall Swept Away From My Dive

Ann Allusion 03-09-2005 06:21 PM

i was swept away and never felt the impact of the plunge
I cant swim but i took the dive anyway
only to get swept away and hear your voice
caught up and swept away By just a small sweep of you,re saving stregnth
is more rapid than the rushing tide below
higher than any mountian
Higher Than all heaven and all earth


i liked the whole piece, cs...but this part just kinda really stuck out... :D :rockon:

creedsister 03-10-2005 12:31 AM

:) :rockon: thank you

HR2004 03-10-2005 01:06 PM

I agree with Ann the whole peiece was good!It really was!


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