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Aimee 02-24-2004 11:04 AM

Slip
 
By: Amy Aumick 2004

Slip!
Oh Life of old.
Slip my grip
Even as I pull
And squeeze
Holding on to those days.
Those days gone by.

TeriB19 02-24-2004 05:14 PM

I like that. Makes me sad and nostalgic, but it's good.

Torn Signs 02-24-2004 05:21 PM

Short yet with a point. :clap:

creedsister 02-24-2004 08:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Torn Signs
Short yet with a point. :clap:

i know it does its hard to let go of the old stuff in life even when we want to let go of it!!!} And the new things in life we cant see!!!} but the old things we can!!! Thats were Faith Comes In!!! To Let Us All Bring Fourth A new Day!!!} I LOVED THE POEM BY THE WAY!!!} :)

Aimee 02-25-2004 09:51 AM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
i know it does its hard to let go of the old stuff in life even when we want to let go of it!!!} And the new things in life we cant see!!!} but the old things we can!!! Thats were Faith Comes In!!! To Let Us All Bring Fourth A new Day!!!} I LOVED THE POEM BY THE WAY!!!} :)


CreedSister, that is probably the most coherent thing I've ever read from you! LOL Thanks. Yes, short like the thoughts I've had lately. Nostalgic and sad, which is the reason I won't allow myself longer thoughts. But I'm still here, still smiling, and taking baby steps. That's all we can do I suppose.

TeriB19 02-25-2004 10:18 AM

And we'll hold your hand as long as you need us to, Aimee. You know that, girl!! :hugs:

creedsister 02-25-2004 11:37 AM

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Originally Posted by Aimee
CreedSister, that is probably the most coherent thing I've ever read from you! LOL Thanks. Yes, short like the thoughts I've had lately. Nostalgic and sad, which is the reason I won't allow myself longer thoughts. But I'm still here, still smiling, and taking baby steps. That's all we can do I suppose.

thanks ROCK ON!!!

Dogstar 02-25-2004 08:11 PM

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Originally Posted by TeriB19
And we'll hold your hand as long as you need us to, Aimee. You know that, girl!! :hugs:

Ditto!!!

Nice poem, too, Aimee. It's something we all can relate to at one time or another.

MrSeeker 02-25-2004 08:14 PM

coolness

SCOTTSMYMAN 03-02-2004 02:07 PM

I loved it Aimee. I agree with Teri, that it's sad but reminds me of times that got away from me. :clap:


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