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stappissohot 05-04-2006 12:04 PM

Dreaming (insightful)
 
Dreaming is still like seeming
Seeming to think
Although the mind is dreaming
And although your voice doesn't speak
Dreaming about lost loves
People you'll never know
Although all your love in that dream
Can plainly show
And the nightmares that haunt us
Death stalks us
We wake up and know that
We are alright
And the visions that can be
A tidal wave
Crashing into the sea
And the one step
Is the dream

Rocketqueen 05-05-2006 11:33 AM

Re: Dreaming (insightful)
 
:) yes we wake up and know thats it alright ......and the nightmare ....that haunts us death stalks us....Its Alright Indeed ;) JUST AS LONG AS WE A DREAM WARRIOR , Like On A Nightmare On Elm Street

stappissohot 05-05-2006 11:56 AM

Re: Dreaming (insightful)
 
Yeah, I just made that up in like a minute because I wanted to do a poem about the dreams I've had and came up with that, not too bad for a minute to two minute poem. My others take like 5 minutes so... yeah...

Rocketqueen 05-05-2006 11:36 PM

Re: Dreaming (insightful)
 
although your voice doesnt speak dreaming about lost loves people you will never know sweetheart i loved those lines as well , but a different prespective and point of view i took from that line like not from the dream but other views like times you spent with others long gone and the time you spent with theme shall return to your memory and after looking inside yourself over and over again it makes you wonder what was so speciale about that person and they still sorta cling to your soul and you pray They will find that need ...


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