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Ann Allusion 06-02-2005 02:02 AM

When Lightening Strikes
 
When Lightening Strikes

There’s a storm a brewin’
Clouds are movin’ in
Blue sky's getting’ hazey
A light show’s gonna begin

Feel the passion in the air
Even the blind could see
I’ve become the lightening rod
To his electricity

Struck…there’s only silence…
Don’t know what to say
Tongue tied and twisted up
Words just fade away

Look into each others eyes
Standing face to face
Neither of us want to move
From this sacred space

Second strike…watch sparks fly
As he pulls me in
Encircled by his tender arms
Let the game begin

His scent somehow warms me
He’s turning up the heat
How my heart is racing
My knees are getting weak

Breathing softly in my ear...
Then my cheek, at last…my lips…
Heaven and earth by lightening moved
With his gentle kiss…

©2005
Susan D.

HR2004 06-02-2005 12:06 PM

Loved it!

creedsister 06-02-2005 12:08 PM

:) that was as a powerful as it was beautiful :D Wonderful Writing Ann ........ :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

MissSeeker 06-02-2005 12:56 PM

Great work :thumbsup: :thumbsup: very inspiring

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Ann Allusion 06-02-2005 08:46 PM

thanks, you guys are so sweet....glad you enjoyed it...:rockon:


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