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tremonti4life04 12-13-2004 11:43 PM

The Arrow
 
[[The Arrow]]

I've closed the doors
And fought the wars
My pain, my anger
It sings like yours
I've built the wall
Still standing tall
Ive beaten you
But still I fall

I've been shot down
The arrow flew too true
I've fallen from the sky
But I can't give in to you

I lost the greater cause
I've slammed into the earth
But from my ashes rise
The phoenix's flaming birth

I came from the ashes
And danced in the sun
My body and the flames
Our spirits are one
You lit the torch
With a single arrow I fell
But now Im brighter than the sun
And hotter than the depths of hell

In my flesh the arrow head stays
I dormant reminder of the ways
You shot me down and and broke my wings
But now this Bird of fire sings
To be a reminder before your eyes
That you can't bring me down
No matter how true the arrow flies

creedsister 12-14-2004 12:18 AM

AWSOME :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam:

Ann Allusion 12-14-2004 10:33 AM

quite expressive... :)

creedsister 12-14-2004 11:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ann Allusion
quite expressive... :)

you bet it was, Strong Writing The Opening, Rocked And The Ending, WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


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