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Ann Allusion 09-19-2004 07:11 PM

Under The Gun
 
Under The Gun

When your eyes are open
Do you happen to see
All that’s going on
Around you and me
Some things are different
Yet stay the same
The past won’t erase
By changing your name

When your eyes are open
Does the sun warm your face
As mem’ries transport
To a long, lost place
Where life just felt right
Where you only had fun
Never having to feel
You were under the gun

Under the gun
You’ve learned to deal
Under the gun
You’ve forgotten to feel
Under the gun
Life isn’t the same
When you live under the gun
With emotions untamed

When your eyes are open
You communicate
Learn to forgive
Forget how to hate
When you’re under the gun
It’s all about love
At times it takes more
Than a shove

Under the gun
Tho passions may reign
Under the gun
It’s nothing but pain
When you live under the gun
With emotions untamed

©2004
Susan D.

HR2004 09-19-2004 08:06 PM

that poem or song was truly wow i really loved that one bravo.

creedsister 09-19-2004 09:03 PM

Wow Ann, That Was Very Wide Ranged, AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEE :) I Really Really Liked It,

Ann Allusion 09-20-2004 10:16 AM

it's lyrics...:)
thanks y'all for reading them...glad you enjoyed...:jam:

Dogstar 09-29-2004 01:14 PM

Great job, Ann...I loved this part:

Under the gun
You’ve learned to deal
Under the gun
You’ve forgotten to feel
Under the gun
Life isn’t the same
When you live under the gun
With emotions untamed

Ann Allusion 09-29-2004 04:35 PM

thank you...thank you v'ry much...dogstar...;)
forgive me just in a goofy mood...:lol


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