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hand to hold
circling around , beaten back to the past
no sense of direction and no bearings dark clouds cover the celestrial guide Im lost at sea tonight pre chorus I want to dance with you on the shore when your gone so long you forget what it means to be human chorus let me love you again I need a hand to hold though its been a while you are still my home 2nd verse been here before, said Id never return such is life when I choose to be blind following my own flawed judgement thats gotten me here lost at sea tonight pre chorus " " chorus " " interlude wait the canvas is clearing in my mind wait he paints a guiding light wait your patince is not in vain As God as my witness I will make it back the water's a bed of serenity well lay and marvel at the mystery of redemption that we have seen if only you too can forgive me chorus " " |
i need to add more to the verses . Im also thinking of If only as the title . if anyone has suggestions for a title or verses then please share.
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beautiful verses ...even though im not much for poems I really liked this one...
but also it seems to fit the sad moment Im living... :( |
ive never had a girlfreind so its not about me, but parts of it are about coming back to God as a guide in my life and being lonely and feeling lost. I thought of it when I was boating last night being around water always makes me want a girl really badly.
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