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Dogstar 06-01-2004 11:41 PM

Erase Me
 
You may think you’re free
You may think you’re done with me
You may think we’re over now
You may think you’ve won somehow

You can try to erase me
But I am etched behind your eyes
There is no way you can shake me

I will stalk you in your sleep
I will cut your heart for keeps
I will cloud your sunny skies
I will expose your filthy lies

You can try to erase me
But I am etched behind your eyes
There is no way you can take me

You still hear me when she whispers
You still feel me when you touch her
You still taste me when she kisses you
You still say my name when she’s through

You can try to erase me
But I am etched behind your eyes
There is no way you can forsake me

Creed_Defaultgirl 06-02-2004 01:38 AM

Wow, yet another great one by Kerri. It's a very true poem too.

creedsister 06-02-2004 11:57 AM

very true indeed Dogstar, I Loved it Way To Gooooooooooooo, Clap Clap Clap

Dogstar 06-02-2004 12:07 PM

Thanks, you guys! :)

SCOTTSMYMAN 06-02-2004 04:27 PM

AWESOME, but what else could we expect when it comes to Kerri writing poems. As always, Kerri your words took me. Your emotion is raw and powerful. Thank you again for sharing your talent. :clap: :hugs:

Sincirr 06-03-2004 12:28 AM

Raw is the word.
Wow girl.
Very honest, very confronting.

Dogstar 06-03-2004 12:35 AM

Awww, thanks you guys...Sincirr, I tend to be in-your-face at times, hehehe...:D.

aussiecreeder 06-03-2004 10:10 AM

*writes down note saying don't mess with women like kerri* ;)

Dogstar 06-03-2004 11:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by handmedown
*writes down note saying don't mess with women like kerri* ;)


:D

jbjfan 06-05-2004 11:56 PM

whoever you wrote that about knows not to mess with you! ;) another gr8 poem!


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