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Valley of The Damned
"I watch as angels fall to my feet
I'll use them to shield myself from the heat I used their broken wings to try and fly But crashed and burned and then began to cry I feel like just a grain of sand Here in the valley of the damned Here in this darkness I need a light A light to guide me Home Here in this darkness I feel so cold So cold and so alone I try to shield myself from the hauntings sounds As my breath slowly fades and my heart starts to pound Im running from the voices that tell me to give up I cant take it anymore,Father,please take my cup! Im just like a grain of sand Here in the valley of the damned Here in this darkness I see a light A light telling me to keep pressing on Here in this darkness I hear a voice A voice telling me soon this will all be gone ...have mercy on me I just lost sight on all that could set me free I ran away from You because I couldnt see I tried to hide because of all my selfish lies I only thought of myself and couldnt lose my pride But now I realize that none of that was worth losing life A thousand times I cried for You,but out came the knife I died a selfish death I know,I only thought of me I should have lived for You alone,for only You could set me free!!! Here in this darkness I am not alone My Father is here holding me,He will take me Home Here in this darkness I have a best friend A friend who wants to be with me until the very end." Thats my newest,hope you like it! :D |
Great rhyming, loved the theme, loved the rhythm is awesome. Keep it up. This is definately in the top three of urs I like the most.
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Thanks alot Kim :D
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I think that one's my favorite. :D
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Thanks alot!!! :D
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I really liked it hehe~~Mercy is what keeps us Really i know these things ROCK ON :D :D :D
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thanks alot Ta :D
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your welcome by the way :D
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Nice man. I can totally place myself right into it. This is one of your best yet. I can even hear it (in many different forms) as I read it. Awesome!!
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Thanks alot :D
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