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The Lithium 02-22-2004 03:01 PM

Tonight
 
Hey guys. I actually wrote this lyric last summer when I missed someone to death. I read it now and actually thought it was great, so I thougth I'd share it with you guys! :D

Here you go:

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Tonight
My minds are surroundend
And my memorys are few
That's when I am needing you
Then the price gets taller
And it pass me through
And the views from the yesterday
Can't be turned away
There isn't time for everyone
Some one have to pay
Pay the price of loneliness...
Suffer, pain and failed

But if you could give me just one love, just one life
Just one more night

And tonight is all we got
Tonight, the very last night
Tonight, a second chance
Tonight, I know you're sad and so am I
Tonight, the very last night

So let's do a try and feel the love tonight

Need some time with you
Want to say something to you
The only chance to tell you
But how can I explane?
How it has passed me through
Life is a chance
Of everyone...Could it be me?
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space

But if you could give me just one love, just one life
Just one more night

And tonight is all we got
Tonight, the very last night
Tonight, a second chance
Tonight, I know you're sad and so am I
Tonight, the very last night

So let's do a try and feel the love tonight

WeatheredWoman 02-22-2004 04:38 PM

Awesome Lith!!!! :thumbsup:

Very touching!

I like to see you more often here in the Creative Corner. :D

MrSeeker 02-22-2004 04:46 PM

Yea, that was good :D

creedsister 02-23-2004 10:37 AM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
Awesome Lith!!!! :thumbsup:

Very touching!

I like to see you more often here in the Creative Corner. :D

yes me 2 nice poem by the way

The Lithium 02-23-2004 12:03 PM

Thanks... Well, I frist for me and not for CreedFeed so that's why I easilie forget to share it here! :D

creedsister 02-23-2004 01:06 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
Thanks... Well, I frist for me and not for CreedFeed so that's why I easilie forget to share it here! :D

hehe ok

creedsister 02-23-2004 01:09 PM

you know what Extrme i would like no love too see ummmm what all poems you have written you little bratt!!!! HAHA I kill me!! :D :D :D

The Lithium 02-23-2004 01:19 PM

You mean you wanna read 'em all or just want to know why I write, where I get my insperation from and who I'm writing for??

creedsister 02-23-2004 01:26 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
You mean you wanna read 'em all or just want to know why I write, where I get my insperation from and who I'm writing for??

no not really with all the other stuff } I would just like to read theme All ya know cool stuff Loooooooooove it :D :

Torn Signs 02-23-2004 04:35 PM

I like the flow and how it is put together. It has a certain rhythm to it. Also it's a good topic to read about, congrats :clap:.

The Lithium 02-24-2004 03:02 AM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
no not really with all the other stuff } I would just like to read theme All ya know cool stuff Loooooooooove it :D :


What, you wanna read like all my love songs?

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Originally Posted by Torn Signs
I like the flow and how it is put together. It has a certain rhythm to it. Also it's a good topic to read about, congrats :clap:.


Thanks, I'll keep that in mine! :D

creedsister 02-24-2004 01:31 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
What, you wanna read like all my love songs?



Thanks, I'll keep that in mine! :D

that would be nice!!!

The Lithium 03-05-2004 08:35 AM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
that would be nice!!!


Well, my love songs is often sad once. Still wanna read 'em?

Aimee 03-05-2004 12:17 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
Well, my love songs is often sad once. Still wanna read 'em?


ooh, I do! I do! PS: This is my fave line...
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space

creedsister 03-05-2004 12:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Aimee
ooh, I do! I do! PS: This is my fave line...
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space

whooooo Yes I know Aim Old girl I would love to read all this deep stuff that this Bratt is Got HEy Extrme Dont Hold Back On Us Send mine In A pm Too hahaha :2cents: :hammerlol ;) ;)

The Lithium 03-05-2004 04:10 PM

Keeeeey... You are like two of my biggest fans! :D A have a few already.

WeatheredWoman 03-13-2004 10:40 AM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
Keeeeey... You are like two of my biggest fans! :D A have a few already.



You do?????? ;)

The Lithium 03-14-2004 09:32 AM

Sure, people enjoy what I write and what I do one stage. :D

creedsister 03-14-2004 11:49 AM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
Sure, people enjoy what I write and what I do one stage. :D

Cute Bratt Face

The Lithium 03-14-2004 01:50 PM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
Cute Bratt Face


Thank you! :D

creedsister 03-14-2004 05:50 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
Thank you! :D

Heheheh !!!! Your Welcome Now!!! Bratt Face :psyche: ;)

The Lithium 03-18-2004 03:28 PM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
Heheheh !!!! Your Welcome Now!!! Bratt Face :psyche: ;)


This is getting off topic

creedsister 03-18-2004 04:59 PM

Getting off Topic U Say, Your Wrong its Been off topic, I dont Care. :psyche: Haha, :D

The Lithium 03-20-2004 09:29 AM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
Getting off Topic U Say, Your Wrong its Been off topic, I dont Care. :psyche: Haha, :D


What?? :wtf:

creedsister 03-20-2004 10:36 AM

Bratt face, Take a chill pill :D I wont kick you No more I Will Be Good :)

The Lithium 03-22-2004 08:05 AM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
Bratt face, Take a chill pill :D I wont kick you No more I Will Be Good :)


I don't belive you!!

creedsister 03-22-2004 12:33 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
I don't belive you!!

hehe you know me, much to well bratt boy :kick: :spank: hehe Peace Now ;)

The Lithium 03-22-2004 03:27 PM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
hehe you know me, much to well bratt boy :kick: :spank: hehe Peace Now ;)


Alright, peace...? :rolleyes:

WeatheredWoman 03-22-2004 06:50 PM

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Hey you 2.... is this crap still going on!!! :confused:

Kidzzz, kidzzz, kidzzzz.... *shakes head* ;)

I've tried to upload 2 pics of mine but CreedFeed won't let me... I know it's total horror... that must've been why I can't upload :(

I thought I will annoy you guys with a pic! Since this thread already was off-topic... LOL!!!

Pleased to meet you :D It's a bit blurred... it was a cheap cam! :eek:

creedsister 03-22-2004 08:43 PM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
Hey you 2.... is this crap still going on!!! :confused:

Kidzzz, kidzzz, kidzzzz.... *shakes head* ;)

I've tried to upload 2 pics of mine but CreedFeed won't let me... I know it's total horror... that must've been why I can't upload :(

I thought I will annoy you guys with a pic! Since this thread already was off-topic... LOL!!!

Pleased to meet you :D It's a bit blurred... it was a cheap cam! :eek:

sweet looking girl u are stef

WeatheredWoman 03-22-2004 09:01 PM

Hahaha I am sweet Sis... I am! ;)

creedsister 03-22-2004 09:08 PM

yes I know, oh bet of Course

The Lithium 03-23-2004 06:29 AM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
Pleased to meet you :D It's a bit blurred... it was a cheap cam! :eek:


Hey, you're suppose to be kinda old!!! Why do you look like 17 and pretty hot? I really can't belive I said that to one who have kinds. :eek:

WeatheredWoman 03-23-2004 01:43 PM

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Hey, you're suppose to be kinda old!!! Why do you look like 17 and pretty hot? I really can't belive I said that to one who have kinds. :eek:


17 ??? :eek: :eek: :eek: You better face it Sebas... I'm 36!

LOL!! I'll take that as a compliment Sebas hahaha...

Here I look shocked... after that 17 comment! :roll:

The Lithium 03-23-2004 03:48 PM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
17 ??? :eek: :eek: :eek: You better face it Sebas... I'm 36!

LOL!! I'll take that as a compliment Sebas hahaha...

Here I look shocked... after that 17 comment! :roll:


Did I say 17? Oh sorry, I ment 71. :D hahaha!

creedsister 03-23-2004 08:08 PM

i want what ever skincare prouducts that ww is using, HahaHa

Sincirr 03-24-2004 12:23 AM

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Haha, yeh I agree!!!!!
Hey! Here's one of me trying to play guitar that my friend scanned in! I'll join the offtopic club!

creedsister 03-24-2004 12:36 AM

nice pic sincirr, i like that off topic club nothing like a chick with a gutiar

Sincirr 03-24-2004 12:41 AM

Lol thanks. Nothing like a chick that can PLAY a guitar though! hehe

I was mucking around trying to do tapping and my friend took it. There are also other ones, cos we were in a youth band at the time and took some silly promo shots, hehe. That, unfortunately, was one of them!

creedsister 03-24-2004 12:46 AM

Lol Sure was


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