Onwards On You
 

In September I'll be a runner
Running away from all I don't hunger
And I'm hungry for a timer
So in a diner I'll be in comfort
With you

To slow it down

Yeah it feels
Like I'm on my own

And it feels
Like I'm all alone

In the fields
Of a cornerstone

And the wheels
They won't stop turning, no

Mama said "You don't know,
But you have to go."
On my own, here I know
I will go alone

And I will strive onwards
And I will thrive on you
I won't battle backwards
Because there's a fight in you

Yeah it feels
Like I'm on my own

And it feels
Like I'm all alone

In the fields
Of a cornerstone

And the wheels
They won't stop turning, no

With the future
Itching my nose

Re: Onwards On You
 

Kwl I really liked it. I like the story that you have told and the fact you haven't overdone it on the rhyming. Nice one :smokin:

Re: Onwards On You
 

Thanks. While writing I was trying to capture a kind of mix between Third Eye Blind and U2.

Re: Onwards On You
 

reminds me of soul A. Run Away Train And Green Days Oh Wake Me When Sept Ends... im alone in the fields of a cornerstone i really fell in those verses, something we all can relate to, reminds me also of one mine brain storms potery Floating, but yeah i liked the entire piece ....

Re: Onwards On You
 

Thanks a lot :)

Re: Onwards On You
 

your welcome as always, nagpo :) from alternativing wrting style and putting things together , your one of the best, man.... :rockon: