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adparaiki 08-15-2010 08:55 AM

Still here with me - with live recording
 
Hi my friends. I would really appreciate any feedback on the lyrics, song and recording performance.

I recorded the song in one take on a tape machine lol and then just plugged it into my pc and then put it to mp3 and uploaded it onto the site.

The song is here - http://www.totallyunsigned.co.uk/textbooktakedown
and is called Still here with me. It is just me singing and playing guitar

The lyrics are

Verse 1 & 2 - haven't done lyrics for verse 2 yet sorry
I had braced myself for you to leave
But you came through for me
And I need you more than you know
Has life taken its toll

Pre-Chorus
On me - I know now you'd never leave
You and me - I know now we'll never be too far apart

Chorus
Can believe your still here with me
I thought I would just loose my mind
without you by myside

Other Section
Without you here i'd fall apart inside
that's why i'm still holding on to you


Cheers

Adam

TrulyAmazing 08-15-2010 09:06 PM

Re: Still here with me - with live recording
 
those are pretty good, i,ll wait on the rest of the lyrics, now why should i give feed back on ya,alls stuff, in all, when i dont get any feed back on my stuff, not that im looking for it i enjoy sharing it wit ya,s part of my salvation, and please no im kidding in a round about way, ;) PEACE BE WITH YOU, Soul Spirt Love Peace, Harmony, ...........:rockon: :peacelove

adparaiki 08-16-2010 01:01 PM

Re: Still here with me - with live recording
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by TrulyAmazing
those are pretty good, i,ll wait on the rest of the lyrics, now why should i give feed back on ya,alls stuff, in all, when i dont get any feed back on my stuff, not that im looking for it i enjoy sharing it wit ya,s part of my salvation, and please no im kidding in a round about way, ;) PEACE BE WITH YOU, Soul Spirt Love Peace, Harmony, ...........:rockon: :peacelove


Aw i'm sorry if i mist posts by you. I know I gave feedback on a couple of your posts and I know you always give feedback on my posts so thanks I really appreciate it. :)

What did you think of the actual recording out of interest?

TrulyAmazing 08-16-2010 09:38 PM

Re: Still here with me - with live recording
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by adparaiki
Aw i'm sorry if i mist posts by you. I know I gave feedback on a couple of your posts and I know you always give feedback on my posts so thanks I really appreciate it. :)

What did you think of the actual recording out of interest?

its all good, i got some new stuff im going to post up later anyways :D first chance i get, i could,nt get the link to open, bilal knows all about that area, your welcome,


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