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MrSeeker 03-02-2004 06:54 PM

Died for Me
 
"It seems I have lost touch with all that made me seem real
Im losing everything and all that I used to feel
Feel,meant more,but now means nothing
When I look and see of all You've done for me
Your the only thing I want,the only thing I need
To be alive again,to be freed

Flashbacks of that sorrowfull day
When You gave it all away
All away for me, even though I did'nt deserve a thing
But You still died for me

Just over the horrizon you can see the sun fade
The world goes silent and everythings taken away
Thunder shatters the silence with a violent shake
How many times will it take before we brake?
We can pretend we didnt hammer the nails into His hands
We can pretend we didnt do it,but what happends in the end?

Flashbacks of such a tragic day
When You gave it all away
All away for me even though I cursed You
But in the end You knew

You were the only hope for mankind
That we were all walking blind
But I love you now
I cant even remember why or how
Why I cused You or how I became so corrupt
But now Im ending that and never giving up

Visions of a time when I am Yours and You are mine
There is no time here,we left it behind
Left it behind, You carry me and take away my fears
Here, where we call it Home, no more sorrow,no more tears."


Im gonna send this in the newsletter too along with some other stuff Im working on,but I got tired of not seeing anything of mine here,so yea.

creedsister 03-02-2004 09:29 PM

we cant pretend we didnt hammer the nails into his hands......Yes we did ( like that part....seeks i was getting tired of not seeing nothing of yours too..I really Like this one To bad my printer is broke :( im sure if was something i didnt like it would work :(

PaulMcCoygirl 03-02-2004 10:17 PM

That's excellent! You're a good writer! :)

MrSeeker 03-03-2004 01:06 PM

Hahahaha,what are you saying? I write stuff you dont like somtimes??? hehe,just kidding.

Thanks! :D

Dogstar 03-03-2004 07:57 PM

That is really sweet, MrSeeker! Excellent job.

JulieCitySlicker 03-03-2004 10:04 PM

Very good Kevin :D

MrSeeker 03-04-2004 12:53 AM

Thanks! :D


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