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Carly 10-27-2009 04:28 PM

Sips Of Love
 
maybe you were the wrong companion
to ask to fight along in this war
you see the girl is fragile
but you're not one
of the great minds
to understand what goes on inside

I cry my tears day by day
they are heavy on me but still I stay
somehow I can't take that last step
like a kid on candy I'm hooked on your help
and day by day I fade
taking sips of love
I find along the way

maybe the friend I need
is way on the other side
maybe I should turn away
when they think they know my life
but deep there inside is turning pale blue
and despite of that I must let go of you

and I'm drowning
and I'm drowning
and these sips of love
are failing to make a change
and our love is failing
doesn't that sound strange

TrulyAmazing 10-27-2009 06:29 PM

Re: Sips Of Love
 
That Was Really Deep Potery Carly Thank You For Sharing With Us :) I really Liked These Lines But Your Not One Of The Great Minds To Understand What Goes On Inside Very Moving

Carly 10-28-2009 11:08 AM

Re: Sips Of Love
 
Thanks! :)

TrulyAmazing 10-30-2009 10:56 AM

Re: Sips Of Love
 
your very much welcome :)

Lost Tiger 11-02-2009 11:43 AM

Re: Sips Of Love
 
That was awesome. =D

silentstorm 11-04-2009 04:20 AM

Re: Sips Of Love
 
*Amazed!*

Carly 11-15-2009 09:25 AM

Re: Sips Of Love
 
THank you so much guys!

TrulyAmazing 11-23-2009 11:18 AM

Re: Sips Of Love
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Carly
THank you so much guys!

your very much welcome:) i got some new stuff as well that the writers in this divison would like well i hope anyways share wit ya,s when time permits in all Peace Ya,alls


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