Something Corrupt
 

"Right from the start I tore my flesh apart
Born into this world so cold and so dark
Right from the start I cursed you
Right from the start we both knew
I was somthing corrupt

Im something corrupt,but Im not giving up
No,Im not giving in only to begin again

Im something corrupt,but Im not letting go
No,Im not letting go of what I know

Im the horrid voice within your head
Im the darkness that wants you dead
Im the shadow that will consume you
Im the past that will come back to haunt you

Im something corrupt,but Im not giving up
No,Im not giving in only to begin again

Im something corrupt,but Im not letting go
No,Im not letting go of what I know

As the seconds become minutes
As the days pass slowly by
As the years become double digits
Im afraid that you will have to die

Im something corrupt,but Im not giving up
No,Im not giving in only to begin again

Im something corrupt,but Im not letting go
No,Im not letting go of what I know
...Is true"

Hope ya like it...its a newer one

Very cool, MrSeeker. It has a Metallica feel to it, especially the part where it starts, I'm the horrid voice within your head!!

Awesome!!! Thats what I was aiming for on it!!!

anywayz,i wish i would get dissed sometimes...im kinda tired of everyone saying how goodmy stuff is,but i guess its all good...haha
Thanks :D

Lmao!

Well, I won't be dissing ya either, Mr. Seeker. It's a great poem. I love the ending, it wasn't what I was expecting. :D

there it sucked does that make you feel better haha}to be honest out of the dark stuff you,ve written i really love this one,,it gives me a do or die vibe i like that STRONG} Words,,i liked im not letting go of what i know :D :D :jam:

Well,thanks you two :D
HAHAHA

your welcome :jam:

You're welcome.:D

Yet again you pull it off, good job and the vibe is the best part, awesome.

thats right :D

Thanks alot Kim!
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