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Dogstar 12-17-2003 01:01 AM

Darkest Angel
 
Twisted image skewed by fate
Stranger stares back eyes of hate
On blackened wings she makes her flight
Disappears no will in sight

Hides behind a wall of doubt
Wishes she could block it out
Scrubs herself so hard she bleeds
Cannot seem to ever get clean

Cold sweats come in steady waves
Checkout time is what she craves

Longs to break from desperate grip
Tries to climb but always slips
Purple haze of a memory
Badge of blame her enemy

Wears it tight around her neck
Weighs her down such a wreck
Unplugs the phone pulls the shades
Trades her pills for razor blades

Cold sweats come in steady waves
Checkout time is what she craves

Sees his shadow everywhere
Swallows hard to smother fear
On blackened wings she makes her flight
Darkest angel out of sight

creedsister 12-17-2003 12:07 PM

that was really moving dogstar,,really

Dogstar 12-18-2003 02:57 AM

Thanks, creedsister!

SCOTTSMYMAN 12-18-2003 07:49 AM

:thud: I loved this one! I could feel all the emotion just attacking me in every direction! This is my favorite one! :clap:

Aimee 12-18-2003 11:55 AM

Wow. That last part gave me goosebumps!

Dogstar 12-18-2003 09:18 PM

Thanks much, you guys! :)


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