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aussiecreeder 05-04-2004 12:22 PM

they don't understand
 
guilt kills you all the time
why did i go there?
if there is a god
he has fallen asleep at the wheel
lets drag him in
try him and throw away the key

how dare he tell me right and wrong
there is only good and bad
why is it wrong to end my mother's suffering
this child what life is this?

see his soliders
living by the hyprocritcal creed
their disease no different to mine
my conscience keeping me ransom

they live with rose-coloured glasses
with picket fences and the 2.3 kids
don't they see the pain in her eyes
isn't my opinion as valid as yours?

don't show me that video
of my babies suffering
my conscience does it exist?
damn this situation and this god
why can't i just run and hide?

creedsister 05-04-2004 12:56 PM

speachless

goddess_bb 05-04-2004 01:08 PM

It is darkly moving and profound...the depth of devestation and hopelesness shown in your poem is tragic...

creedsister 05-04-2004 01:57 PM

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Originally Posted by goddess_bb
It is darkly moving and profound...the depth of devestation and hopelesness shown in your poem is tragic...

yes i know it, IT ROCKS, it can all be recreated it, HAHA peace out,

Dogstar 05-04-2004 02:39 PM

Quote:

see his soliders
living by the hyprocritcal creed
their disease no different to mine
my conscience keeping me ransom

That is one awesome verse. Nicely done, hide.

aussiecreeder 05-04-2004 09:58 PM

thanks guys i must pay this one girl who inadvertenly inspires me to write quite negative things. :)

Dogstar 05-04-2004 10:10 PM

Hahaha, that's awesome. I know what you mean. I have a few people I should thank for the same thing ;).

aussiecreeder 05-04-2004 10:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dogstar
Hahaha, that's awesome. I know what you mean. I have a few people I should thank for the same thing ;).


if we had only nice people in our lives what would we write about? :D

Dogstar 05-04-2004 10:30 PM

Hehehehe, good point.

aussiecreeder 05-04-2004 10:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dogstar
Hehehehe, good point.


my wife is beautiful and she never nags me
a dripping tap she ain't
roast every night
my kids always listen to me
and never ask me for money

my dog rolls over on command
and my job is safe
i haven't gained a pound since high school
and gravity hasen't taken its course

i can eat nothing but donuts and coke
its heaven on a stick
here at the pearly gates
lets ask can we stay

Dogstar 05-04-2004 10:51 PM

LMAO! That's awesome!!!

creedsister 05-04-2004 11:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by handmedown
my wife is beautiful and she never nags me
a dripping tap she ain't
roast every night
my kids always listen to me
and never ask me for money

my dog rolls over on command
and my job is safe
i haven't gained a pound since high school
and gravity hasen't taken its course

i can eat nothing but donuts and coke
its heaven on a stick
here at the pearly gates
lets ask can we stay

my kids always listen to me and never ask for money HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

aussiecreeder 05-04-2004 11:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by creedsister
my kids always listen to me and never ask for money HAHAHAHAHAHAHA



hehehe the bank of mum and dad is always open, kids remember that and take advantage of their undying love! :D

Dogstar 05-04-2004 11:56 PM

Hahahahaha, the bank of mum and dad...:D

creedsister 05-05-2004 12:00 AM

take advantge of their love :D hahahahahaha, thats true


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