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they don't understand
guilt kills you all the time
why did i go there? if there is a god he has fallen asleep at the wheel lets drag him in try him and throw away the key how dare he tell me right and wrong there is only good and bad why is it wrong to end my mother's suffering this child what life is this? see his soliders living by the hyprocritcal creed their disease no different to mine my conscience keeping me ransom they live with rose-coloured glasses with picket fences and the 2.3 kids don't they see the pain in her eyes isn't my opinion as valid as yours? don't show me that video of my babies suffering my conscience does it exist? damn this situation and this god why can't i just run and hide? |
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It is darkly moving and profound...the depth of devestation and hopelesness shown in your poem is tragic...
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That is one awesome verse. Nicely done, hide. |
thanks guys i must pay this one girl who inadvertenly inspires me to write quite negative things. :)
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Hahaha, that's awesome. I know what you mean. I have a few people I should thank for the same thing ;).
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if we had only nice people in our lives what would we write about? :D |
Hehehehe, good point.
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my wife is beautiful and she never nags me a dripping tap she ain't roast every night my kids always listen to me and never ask me for money my dog rolls over on command and my job is safe i haven't gained a pound since high school and gravity hasen't taken its course i can eat nothing but donuts and coke its heaven on a stick here at the pearly gates lets ask can we stay |
LMAO! That's awesome!!!
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hehehe the bank of mum and dad is always open, kids remember that and take advantage of their undying love! :D |
Hahahahaha, the bank of mum and dad...:D
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take advantge of their love :D hahahahahaha, thats true
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