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2 new songs that need critique
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the songs are #3 ennui which is a song I did vocals on but its actually an enemy of anathema song and # 4 which is an eyemouth song. i may have posted a link for it a while back when it was very raw but this is the finished version save for a few adjustments on vocals |
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I really like safeplace.. Its pretty good reminds me a bit of Cold.. Maybe if possible could you post the lyrics?
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hmm cold. Im not sure what it is about it that sounds like them. I think its more along the lines of softer staind or seether. I like cold though could you please expound why it reminds you of cold.
take your happy pills and an ounce of denial to mask the pain sustain the liar pretend the life you live is the life you desire pretend the hand you hold lifts you higher cover your hands and feet their bleeding red from living in a broken home broken glass in your bed pretend to hold together like the cup in your hand pretend it fills you up but its empty there is nothing theres a disconnect when your afraid to let go a distancing from us please come home your decsions are your battle but were all wounded here listen to us now we all care this is your safe place its ok to make mistakes but to live in one is fraud when so many create your out when a lifes been spent to make you a safeplace and im not sure if you listened to December but thats kinda like safe place #2 cause it continues on the same theme of family love centered around the issue of suicide. Both are about my sister and both I reference a symbolic "cup" |
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[quote=metalanus]hmm cold. Im not sure what it is about it that sounds like them. I think its more along the lines of softer staind or seether. I like cold though could you please expound why it reminds you of cold.
the lyrics remind me alot of their new album "a differant kind of pain" along with the guitar work, but just me;) i do adore Staind tho.... |
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