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nagpo 10-28-2007 05:12 AM

Sedate me
 
I'm God damned tonight because of you
Making me bleed because of your "virtue"
Religions seed is burning my creed
And I'm the only one left who see's the truth

Hypocritical how so typical
Raise your hand and pledge the other
Trapping me; in this world I feel i can never be happy
I guilt you, I blame you
Your belief is crossed across your cross to

Sedate me, sedate me
Sedate me in reverence

Sedate me, sedate me
Sedate me in tolerance

Anymore and I go
Lose the clothes and lose the color
If religon is acceptingness, then I guess I'm a martyr
Thank you, oh thank you for making me falter

Sedate me, sedate me
Sedate me in tolerance

Sedate me, sedate me
Sedate me in reverence

I'm God damned tonight because of you

nagpo 10-28-2007 05:13 AM

Re: Sedate me
 
lol, this is the closest thing i'll ever get to a rap song. and yes i know this one isint that good.


If theres any grammatical errors inform me via pm. Enjoy.

TrulyAmazing 11-03-2007 09:09 PM

Re: Sedate me
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by nagpo
lol, this is the closest thing i'll ever get to a rap song. and yes i know this one isint that good.


If theres any grammatical errors inform me via pm. Enjoy.

no brother if i knew what a Grammatical was i would let you know yes it good i like it i love potery like this cant keep away from it there is nothing like good open potery this one here sedate me gets out good bottled feelings supplications thats why i find dark angey potery beautiful your like a related poet to my taste and you know brother i,ve read others people stuff on the internet and like my first thought man was that dude is freaking sucidle and turns out i got in a up roar they were just venting haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yes i like this one for the feel of truth and the mixture of that vibe of so much against me and that persistense of anger and hopelsness and the tantied feel of im my only salvation yes man its awsome,

nagpo 11-03-2007 09:40 PM

Re: Sedate me
 
wow thanks

TrulyAmazing 11-06-2007 09:32 PM

Re: Sedate me
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by nagpo
wow thanks

your welcome


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