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You and I
So you’re on your own now
Nothing but a faded memory You and I So far away from what we were Nothing but a dusty shelf You and I Pull me down Push me over Bait me So you tread on hopeless wish Nothing but a broken dream You and I So you drain a bleeding heart Nothing but an empty frame You and I Pull me down Push me over Hate me So you cling to someone new Nothing but an afterthought You and I So you utter another vow Nothing but a house of cards You and I Pull me down Push me over Waste me |
Pretty good! I like that! :)
I like these two lines: So you drain a bleeding heart Nothing but an empty frame |
good job again i also like those same lines!
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Thanks a bunch, you guys. Glad you liked it!
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These are great lyrics you come up with, Kerri. I might snag some when I start my little goth band ;)
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LOL, thanks, Aimee!
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I really liked the picture you painted me there, but if you really wanna get me to buy the picture you gotta try more rhyme next time. Don't get me wrong, I liked it, but try rhyme next time, that would be awesome!
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LOL, I rhyme most of the time, so I wanted to try something different. And I think you don't always have to rhyme to paint an effective picture. But thanks for your input, Lith!
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I liked it Dogstar it sounds like someone Got set up for a downfall, i liked it :)
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Thanks, creedsister. Glad you enjoyed it.
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