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ANOTHER PART OF ME (a poem)
Blades of grass
taller than I as I scramble through life's twisting vines. I witness no signs of other life. I see no semblance of light. I hear no voice's sound other than my own. As I near the edge of this field of grass, I envision myself emerging, triumphantly, through. I reach out and grasp a small essence of who I once was. I am ready to shed the empty shell where my soul resides. Within, I know some day, I will discover another part of me to make my soul complete. ©2003 L. A. |
Hey guys, :)
I wrote another poem! :banana: Please feel free to drop a note if you wish!! :dancing: All my best to everyone!! :pimp: Thanks for reading!! :bounce: ~Honey~;) |
I love your poem Honey. I could really feel the emotion in it. Very touching and emotional. I really really like it. :angel:
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simply awesome!!
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Hello ScottsMyMan, :)
Your warm and kind sentiments bring a smile to my heart! Thank you for leaving a note. My best to you!! ~Honey~ ;) |
Hey goddess, ;)
I am so happy you liked this one!! :dancing Thanks so much for writing!! All my best to you!! ~Honey~:D |
Honey, I loved this poem too. I especially love the following part -
As I near the edge of this field of grass, I envision myself emerging, triumphantly, through. I reach out and grasp a small essence of who I once was. I am ready to shed the empty shell where my soul resides. Within, I know some day, I will discover another part of me to make my soul complete. I can really relate to the feeling in those verses. Great work!!:dancing: |
Hey Sheila, ;)
I am so elated you liked this one too!! :dancing: Those verses are special to me as well. They help to remind me to keep striving for my goals, to never let go of my faith and to always believe in myself. I am glad these verses touched you in some way. I am very appreciative for the read and encouragement. Thanks!! Peace to you!! :angel: ~Honey~ :D |
You're welcome.:D
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