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HR2004 07-10-2004 11:59 PM

Fake
 
Hey guys i dont know whats wrong with me i cant seem to write anything i think this on sucks but tell me what you think.thanx



Fake is a word we use when something is'nt real.
Who are we to say if somethings real or if it's fake.
how can we know?who are we too say if love is fake
or real?!you just can't deal with it that i love you.
you just can't take it that someone really does care
for you.i want to be with you.you can't stand that you
love me too that you care so much it hurts to be away.
but you wish to be away.you know im good for you.you
know i make you smile.you know thats what you do for me.
you make me happy to be alive but now that your gone i wish
i was gone from this world.so everyday i wake up and put on
my happy face.I go out into a world where there is no escape.
we are stuck here to live out this life we dont want.
we live a life that dosent even make us smile not
even for a little while.If anything is fake its happiness
my happiness.I pretend im fine I pretend im great but i must
suffer my fate that i will not be able to be happy untill
you and me is whats real and not this fake happiness i put on
everyday.

creedsister 07-11-2004 06:07 AM

that was a real home Run ;)

HR2004 07-11-2004 02:13 PM

thanx creedsister you rock thank you for reading! :)

Rulesdontapply 07-11-2004 02:26 PM

Very good HR! liked it alot.

HR2004 07-11-2004 08:55 PM

thanx rulesdontapply


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