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Aimee 12-12-2003 03:42 PM

When
 
By: Amy Aumick 2003

I know that you hear me
You see it in my face
When I look at you
Whenever we embrace

You must know I hear you
When you never speak at all
Just touch your lips to mine
Yes, I can hear them call

When my nights are lonely
I sit and drink my wine
Listen to the silent dreams
You offer me this time

And when you do
And when we lie
Naked side by side
Let me hear you say to me
That you love me here tonight

Dream while you sleep my love
Dream of me each night
I know how to make you smile
I know how to hold you tight

If I could draw you near me
Every day and every night
I would only whisper to you
Words I know are right

If I said I loved you now
Would you hear it even then?
I love you I love you I love you now
Saying again and again

Now my days aren't empty
My lips they need no wine
I've said it now
Whispered somehow
I won't take it back no I
Wouldn't tell you any lies

Dogstar 12-12-2003 04:06 PM

Oh, Amy....that made me cry. Beautiful!

MrSeeker 12-12-2003 04:44 PM

Yea,that was beautiful :D

creedsister 12-12-2003 06:59 PM

Yo aim that was great i wish i could rite stuff like that,,I would only whisper words i know are right i liked that part

TeriB19 12-12-2003 11:57 PM

Beautiful is all I can say Amy. Fantastic!!

SCOTTSMYMAN 12-13-2003 12:45 AM

That was beautiful Amy! Loved it!

Creed_Defaultgirl 12-14-2003 12:06 AM

WOW! (I'm awestruck!)


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