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My New Song
This is titled CASTLE OF LOVE
1st Verse Your days of hapiness are gone I can tell something is wrong To make it you must be strong If you're weak you wont last long It's time to take a stand Chorus Just take love by the hand And fly away to the promise land And won't it be grand Playing in the clean white sand WE CAN BUILD A CASTLE OF LOVE 2nd Verse Don't let them see your tears Don't let them smell your fears This has gone on for many years All your worries can go away Just close your eyes and hear me say Chorus You can take love by the hand And fly away to the promise land And won't it be grand Playing in the clean white sand WE'VE BUILT A CASTLE OF LOVE Bridge Even if we cry We can build a moat The tears won't drown us out So stand up and shout Chorus I'm gonna take love by the hand And fly away to the promise land And won't it be grand Playing in the clean white sand WE'RE LIVING IN A CASTLE OF LOVE (repeat line till end) :dancing: :dancing: :dancing: tell me what u think it's supposed to be in the vein of "Dont Stop Dancing" and "Inside Us All" |
That was an awesome song Dan! I loved the lyrics. I especially loved the chorus and the bridge was really good. Got anymore!? :dancing: :thumbsup: :clap: :jam:
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no i thought that all up at 2 o'clock last night
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Pretty good. You should try writing more! :thumbsup:
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Wow, that is actually a good love song and not cheesy. Congratulations on that one Dan, I'm impressed.
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i'm bumping this for nostalgia
this song was freaking hilarious.... the sh*t you can think up at 2am. i always pictured David Hasselhoff singing it like the song "I Believe" off the Baywatch soundtrack u can preview that song here (if u have RealPlayer): I Believe |
i liked it :smokin:
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hey that was so good it was awesome!!
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:D I know It :) :rockon:
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great dan i loved it :)
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