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mushroomy2k 12-11-2003 08:34 AM

Come Together
 
Come Together
Come together in the midnight sun,
come together for we are one.
Bound in love we press are faces,
bound in love we've left the traces.
For tommorow there is no hurry,
in after glow the time is now.
we sleep somehow,only God knows
what we lack,
only God can hold us back.

Diane F

creedsister 12-11-2003 09:57 AM

That one,may have been,short,but very deep,i really like the last line only god can hold us back,,good one

SCOTTSMYMAN 12-11-2003 10:20 AM

Nice poem! Sometimes the shorter ones say it all!!

creedsister 12-11-2003 10:29 AM

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Originally Posted by SCOTTSMYMAN
Nice poem! Sometimes the shorter ones say it all!!

thats so true,,,

Creed_Defaultgirl 12-13-2003 11:46 PM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
thats so true

Yup, sometimes long ones just get boring! I've got this big poetry book and sometimes I catch myself thinking, when is this gonna end?! If it's got enough emotions, and the writer keeps it exciting, I like it! As for this poem, IT'S GREAT! Luv it!

PaulMcCoygirl 06-08-2004 12:52 PM

Short and to the point. I like it!! :)

creedsister 06-08-2004 01:40 PM

HaHa Im Still Down With That One :jam: :jam: :jam:

Torn Signs 06-13-2004 01:00 AM

Great. I love the boldness in it and the power.

mushroomy2k 08-10-2008 10:48 PM

Re: Come Together
 
wow i can't believe this site is still here and i actually remembered my password.and all my old post are here still.awsome

TrulyAmazing 08-12-2008 05:07 PM

Re: Come Together
 
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Originally Posted by mushroomy2k
wow i can't believe this site is still here and i actually remembered my password.and all my old post are here still.awsome

Yep AND STILL HOLDING TO THE ONE THAT KNOWS GLORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY great to see ya old girl :hugs: :hugs: its fun to revisted potery

mushroomy2k 08-12-2008 07:34 PM

Re: Come Together
 
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Originally Posted by TrulyAmazing
Yep AND STILL HOLDING TO THE ONE THAT KNOWS GLORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY great to see ya old girl :hugs: :hugs: its fun to revisted potery

great to see ya old girl -am definetly that;) lol but won't we all be one day. hugs to you too.have a good evening.

TrulyAmazing 08-14-2008 07:21 PM

Re: Come Together
 
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Originally Posted by mushroomy2k
great to see ya old girl -am definetly that;) lol but won't we all be one day. hugs to you too.have a good evening.

AMEN Choose this day who ye shall serve RICH OUT AND GRAB just has hard now ;) as it will be then I ASURE YA thanks you :hugs:


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