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Expectaion
Can u feel it consuming or is it all to confusing
The emptiness it leaves behind Questions it leaves burning your mind The scars so deep and heavy Loosing your blood so slow and steady Bleeding dry what’s left of your heart Slowly tarring your entire world apart Breaking everything you try and make whole Everything close to you It doesn’t matter what u try and do No matter who you are it finds you Its never to early or late Its all around you and in your fate But I will never except it I will only expect it I can only learn to be ready To feel it coming and learn to be steady I feel that’s all we can ever do So you learn from me and ill learn from you You can only be ready Learn to be ready |
beautiful
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very nice...
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From the last lines of your poem Rules u sound like a great little helper like it :)
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Nice job, Rules...like the visuals.
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that was reall good has alot of feeling in it
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