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Punished
Punished
Punish me with your ignorance, Judge me with a closed mind. A friend is a friend. Sposed to accept every part. I can do that, guess U cant cos U dont know unconditional acceptance, so U cant give it. But why cant U accept that I am a human being! And U can speak your mind, but I am silenced? Muzzle your mouth or else you lose a friend! Should have known better. Why did I bother with yet another who Judges with pre-programmed arguments. Doesn’t see U 4 who U are. Of course it’s doomed 4 failure! Here comes the proverbial rejection. Here comes the hurt. OK,Fine. U wont be the last. I would like to have friends. Friends who dont judge every word I say. Friends who trust and dont run away when I finally express my life freely. When I do up go your insecurity walls I’m cut off, every integrity ignored. From there on, categorized as one with a conservative closed mind. You have absolutely no idea. I AM free. I HAVE an open mind. Open to the one who made it, closed to the one who destroys it. This is wisdom. U know nothing, but I’m Punished by your ignorance. Lost another friend. Punished with your ignorance, Judged with a closed mind. |
Wow, Sincirr, great stuff!
I would like to have friends. Friends who dont judge every word I say. Friends who trust and dont run away when I finally express my life freely. Powerful verse. |
wow sincirr i can relate to all of those things Really,,,nice u keep it up :D
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excellent job, especially with keeping the flow throughout it all. Keep it up.
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That was very good sincirr ;)
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Thanks for all the encouragement. I dont seem to be able to write in neat stanzas or whatever U call em. It just comes out. I must say that that ongoing poem that U guys are doing is amazing! I cant believe U guys can just flow like that, its pretty amazing what U are coming up with.
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