After the Fall
 

Lost my way again
Dazed and confused
Desires exposed
Unable to refuse

In a sea of black
I buck the tide
Layers exposed
Unable to hide

I kneel before you now
Hat in hand
I give it all to you
Help me let go

My hands betray me
Broken and worn
Fault lines exposed
Unable to mourn

Here I am again
Low and contrite
Intent exposed
Unable to fight

I kneel before you now
Hat in hand
I give it all to you
Help me let go

I liked this one Dogstar, it sounds like from the writers point of view they have a lot of trust in the person its too :D It Cool :smokin:

Oh And I really Got into this, Line In A sea Of Black i buck the tide layers exposed unable to hide :D :D

Thanks much, creedsister. I'm glad you liked it :).

that is very good once again, seems like an inner conflict perhaps a forbidden relationship or that could be a metaphor for something else. you want to give in but you know you shouldn't, heart saids one thing, logic saids another. which do you listen to? am i even close? lol

NO it does not sound like forbidden relationship to me, it sounds like a long one, to me thats been through alot,and a strong one it seems, :D but of course that is just my opion, :D

Thanks, hide...and yeah, like Layne Staley said. The song is whatever you think it's about....conflict is involved, though :D.

Wow! I really like this one! What I got was that you kinda felt inside out, like you gave in and then all of your inner feelings were exposed to someone. Just my point of view, though.

Thanks a bunch, Creed_Defaulgirl! I like that people get different things out what I write. That's what makes it so interesting. All these different perspectives and interpretations. Very cool observation there!

Yeah, I like reading what everyone else has to say about it too. You can go back up and look, and just say, hey, that's a way different way to look at whatever happens to be the subject.

Getting caught up with all your poems. Another beautiful one. I don't know what else to see but beautiful and very emotional!

Hehehehe, nice to see you around again, Kris, and thanks as always!