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Torn Signs 01-13-2004 05:33 PM

Continiuos Poem from Creed Members
 
Ok, this is an idea I got from a poem site. One of us starts a poem and others post and continue with it. Since I'm only capable of dark, someone else can start it and then other's can continue w/ it, even if it gets funny or awkward...sound fun? Hope so, have an awesome day everyone one!! ;)

creedsister 01-13-2004 06:47 PM

To weak To cry to strong to die Im sick of the world and all its Lies~~~ :)

Torn Signs 01-13-2004 10:39 PM

Tears from the sky fall from the skies above as the thought of mercy falls down with the thought of the lies.

creedsister 01-13-2004 10:49 PM

inside i dye but lies will always be the reason that tears fall from the sky but i have learned why the reason why the heaveans cry

Torn Signs 01-13-2004 11:13 PM

It's just an ongoing clamber of raindrops on my outside porch, an ongoing sound of dread, with no answers.

creedsister 01-13-2004 11:24 PM

raindrops echos inside my head to remind me of the pain sometimes i feel i have lost more than i have gained but for now the anwsers will remain the same

Torn Signs 01-13-2004 11:38 PM

Nothing are they, not a sound, not a presence, not an act, the answers remain nothing.

MrSeeker 01-14-2004 03:47 AM

Forever dripping into my soul
They rip and tear,they take there toll
There empty droplets,nothing more
They cant end sorrow and they cant be the cure

(was that ok? i have no clue what im doing,haha)

Aimee 01-14-2004 08:54 AM

dripping, drowning
turn me around
swirl my existence
bury my crown

Dogstar 01-14-2004 01:36 PM

Drilling deeper
Endless hole
Bloodless keeper
Stare so cold

WeatheredWoman 01-14-2004 02:19 PM

Darker,
deeper,
Final hour near,
Send those eyedrops made of fear
gave them such fragile wings...
Send them up to heaven,
but heaven was just too high,
I watch them falter against the sky

Torn Signs 01-14-2004 04:56 PM

they falter and fall as if they are ancients, as if they know all about the world,
yet they don't understand

SCOTTSMYMAN 01-14-2004 05:29 PM

They don't understand the journey we take,
As we walk through this land
The pain we all feel
That's written in the sand

creedsister 01-14-2004 06:42 PM

i walk alone from were i stand theres no one there to hold my hand so i will keep my voice silent as it makes know sound

creedsister 01-14-2004 06:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MrSeeker
Forever dripping into my soul
They rip and tear,they take there toll
There empty droplets,nothing more
They cant end sorrow and they cant be the cure

(was that ok? i have no clue what im doing,haha)

your doing ok REALLY


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