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MissSeeker 11-16-2005 11:11 AM

Safety
 
one step away from death
and I see the light
embrace of violence
brought me to the night
and I do regret

couldn't see
between right and wrong
never understood
I'm not singing that song
never saw I was giving myself
to something I'm not

and now I see you in there
and I'm not sure
whether to call you
a hungry violence seeker
but I care enough to know
you are not like them

and I want to tell you this
what you join is what you'll be
and I want to feel your relief
because you still have a chance
to change this in yourself

lets disembrace the dark
lets understand the light
we shell not sell ourselves
to violence and to his hunger
and we will be safe again

Rocketqueen 11-16-2005 02:31 PM

i loved the entire piece k One Step away from death always a great opening And i see the light embrace the Viloence and also another word could be used in place of Viloence , still very well written, could,nt see between the right and wrong never understood im not singing that song Never Saw I was giving myself to something im not and now i see you in there and im not surre whether to call you , i care enough to know your not like theme and i want to tell you this what you join is what you will be, AWSOME Misseeker :) :jam: :jam:

Rocketqueen 11-16-2005 02:33 PM

:D i wanna point out wrting advice haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and i cant spell sure right haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


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