Burning illusions R&R
 

finally free of the world that I made
I can turn and see the place that I stayed
it burns and crumbles and the smoke fills the sky
I turn and stumble and begin to wonder why
why did everything fall apart while I stood and I tried
nothing at all whent right and my hope here has died
shadows of the people I knew cry for me to stay
but I know if I do I wont live one more day
the flames burn away the illusions of who I thought they were
they melt down the confusions and the visions are pure
hate and lies spread through the masses
while the little that I brought slowly passes
staring in fear of the world I created
flames dance in my eyes from a world I hated
smoke fills my lungs and distorts what I say
reality kills the hope and I bleed here today
my world lays in dust and drifts with the wind
the days slowly pass and someday ill meand

this Part Really Touches Me}}Why Did Everything Fall Apart While I Stood And I Tried And }Shadows Of the People I Knew Cry For Me To Stay....that was good in a sad kinda way :) :(

That's a terrific line...it paints a great picture in my mind...Great job, CreedGuy16!

Very good CreedGuy :thumbsup: