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HR2004 10-18-2004 05:30 PM

Glance's
 
Sitting beside you I get nervous.
Then you pass me a glance.
I want to turn and glance back.
But,I get scared.
You glance at me again.
And I think wow he really likes me.
But do I look back into his untelling eyes.
Should I risk you looking back into mine.
Deeper I feel im digging in.
Digging into something.
Something great,Something scary,something new.
Something true,something i want,something diffrent.
Your eyes so mysterious hiding your past.
within them i look trying to know who you are.
Trying not to scare you at the same time.
When you smile at me i smile back.
I cant help it.
it just happens.
I want to know who you are without offending you.
Or us growing apart.
So long have I known you.
Now I want to know the you that you keep,
Hidin behind those sea green eyes.
So much mystery i need to solve.
so much I hide from you too.
I need to share like you need too.
Our friendship stronger growing into something more.
something precious and delicate.
Something i know we wont regret.
Its time for us too share our past to each other.
another glance but this time im holding it there when you look back.

Ann Allusion 10-18-2004 07:57 PM

just one "look"...we can learn a lot from a glance...the first step, in all the steps to come...or the end before it begins...

your writing is the "first step" kind of a glance... :D

nicely done...

creedsister 10-18-2004 09:11 PM

:) Nice One

HR2004 10-18-2004 10:14 PM

thank you!

creedsister 10-19-2004 12:01 AM

u da welcome sweety


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