Fake
 

right guys this is the first time ive posted anything like this on here.

Fake

You drive me crazy
the way you string me along
you make me feel wanted
but i was wrong
i thought you where real
but you're just fake
you seemed so special
but i made a mistake
you took advantage
it wasn't fair
you've screwed up my life
and you still don't care.

:rockon: :) i liked it

That was really awesome!I liked it alot!

thanx guys i really appreciate the great comments, i was nervous about posting it cause you're all so good. :)

ohs goodness dont be nerveous i know i like rule :D but i thought it was awsome :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam:

aw thankyou :hugs:

I agree with creedsister yes we are good but your work is too and you can only get better by posting more and more!

Yes :jam: :jam:

nicely done, anna1011...keep writing...:rockon: