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The Lithium 03-20-2004 05:15 AM

Blurred
 
I haven't writen much for awhile... Guess I'm too stressed. Oh well, I wrote this yesterday. Please read and tell what you think. It's called "Blurred".

Here you go:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blurred
Blurred
Don't deny what you see
Forever livin' in you and me
Cold again, I am alone
Hiding between what's empty and what's wrong
Save my life, I fade away
I say goodbye, you run your way

A new misstake I can't afford
Harder to breath than never before
Nothing new, fades in dreams
In my thoughts, nothing's as it seems
Take my time, throw it away
Make me a key and let me stay

In my life, you will find
Find inside, in my mind
Cry again, cry my friend
Hideaway, hide again

A little boy, stands on his own
Let's seach for the moment when time starts to grow
Is that it, is that all?
Don't feel very much after all
Anyway... have to move on
Can't stand between dream and reality for too long

In my eyes, you will find
Find inside, in my mind
Try again, try my friend
Seach for me, and you'll see...

If you share my minds, we will find
Find inside, in the night
Bring me eyes, back to life
No more lies as we slowly dies

And as you cries, you will find
Find inside, in my mind
Cry again, cry my friend
And I'll do all I can to make this end


Peace, Lith

creedsister 03-20-2004 10:27 AM

*My Reply*
 
Bratt Face Ive Just Read It Oh About, 17 min, Ago Its Took Me That Long To Get It Back Together, :jam: :jam: :crying: :crying: :crying: And As Forest Gump, Would Say Face, Thats All I Have To Say About that

The Lithium 03-20-2004 11:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by creedsister
Bratt Face Ive Just Read It Oh About, 17 min, Ago Its Took Me That Long To Get It Back Together, :jam: :jam: :crying: :crying: :crying: And As Forest Gump, Would Say Face, Thats All I Have To Say About that


But you liked it, right?

creedsister 03-20-2004 01:05 PM

Hi There :D Yes I Did ;)

The Lithium 03-20-2004 05:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by creedsister
Hi There :D Yes I Did ;)


Goodie! :D

creedsister 03-20-2004 07:55 PM

Goodie Goodie Gum Drops :D hehe

The Lithium 03-22-2004 05:02 AM

I'm glad you liked it, but hey!! Where's everybody else?

Trees of Wisdom 03-22-2004 05:14 AM

Good job, Lith!

The Lithium 03-22-2004 05:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Trees of Wisdom
Good job, Lith!


You liked it?

creedsister 03-22-2004 12:27 PM

He Said He Did, Or then again he could just said it to be nice :D HAHAHAHAHA,

The Lithium 03-22-2004 03:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by creedsister
He Said He Did, Or then again he could just said it to be nice :D HAHAHAHAHA,


As awlays, you're wicked kind!! ;)

creedsister 03-22-2004 08:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
As awlays, you're wicked kind!! ;)

I know

WeatheredWoman 03-22-2004 09:47 PM

I've read it Sebas..... :)

(Now ask me, ask me!)

The Lithium 03-23-2004 06:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
I've read it Sebas..... :)

(Now ask me, ask me!)


You liked it? :cool:

The Lithium 03-24-2004 04:31 PM

Sooo?? :wtf: What do you think?


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