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The Lithium

12-21-2003 03:57 PM

Breaking Througe

Well, what can I say? I wrote this awhile ago and... Why not share it? Here you go!

Quote:

Breaking Througe:
There's a million tears streaming down today
Promise myself to never do the same misstake again
I'm missing you, believe in you
People pray for you today
Promise myself to never cry again
I'm tursting you, loving you

Now I've realized that tomorrow is today
Promise myself to never waste time again
I'm seeing you, hearing you
I never want to feel what I feel today
Promise myself to never walk away again
I'm trying to, forget you

But it doesn't really matter
You're gone
You were right

The dark shines bright today
Promise myself to never be dazzled again
I'm calling you, losing you
Wish I could break through today
Promise myself to never be found again
I'm understanding you, visualizing you

But it doesn't really matter
You're gone
And you were right

And it doesn't really matter
I'm here
I wasn't right

Creed_Defaultgirl

12-21-2003 04:35 PM

That's great! Thanks for sharing with us!

The Lithium

12-21-2003 04:48 PM

I'm just writing whatever's on my mind.

Thanks for having me!

Dogstar

12-21-2003 04:58 PM

Lith, way to go! Nicely done...Love the emotion in it.

creedsister

12-21-2003 11:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM

I'm just writing whatever's on my mind.

Thanks for having me!

Killer poem litch ;)

The Lithium

12-22-2003 04:57 AM

Thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by creedsister

Killer poem litch ;)

That's my thing! ;) Glad you guys liked it!

Torn Signs

12-22-2003 07:56 AM

yea, awesome job!!! ;)

The Lithium

12-22-2003 08:54 AM

Thanks. I write a lot. And I'm not even 15 yet! :D I am in a week! :smokin:

creedsister

12-22-2003 09:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Torn Signs

yea, awesome job!!! ;)

word

The Lithium

12-23-2003 04:25 AM

Thanks again

Thanks again guys. I just write whatever may come from my heart.

creedsister

12-23-2003 10:29 PM

litch i dont mean to sound stoopid but who in the heck is the dude on your avatar? :wtf:

hide	12-25-2003 10:01 PM

great stuff keep it up writing poetry, painting whatever does wonders!

The Lithium

03-05-2004 08:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hide

great stuff keep it up writing poetry, painting whatever does wonders!

I'm sure I will! :D

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