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metalanus 07-24-2006 07:02 PM

Paper Chapel Bleeding
 
Id like to hear your interpretations of this . I will give you mine at the end so dont let that influence what you get out of it.

an old sunken sanctuary
that is me
desecrated and abandonned
so empty

how do i fit in your perfect plan
assymetrical I am
full of frayed edges
some unseen
others you cut away at

take the knife to me again
bleed me of whats tainted
thoughts to run red
may they never come back again

your not gone
but your not here
like a bride on a wedding day
that has fled

looking through the window
waiting for the right time
to tear down these walls
and rebuild sublime

take the knife to me again
bleed me of whats tainted
thoughts to run red
may they never come back again

its about God allowing us to distance ourselves from him and at times how he works in the shadows making us think he has left but he is just building up our faith not gone but in a way not there.

bilal 07-25-2006 01:58 AM

Re: Paper Chapel Bleeding
 
yup...the feelings are all true........

J-Man 08-06-2006 04:57 PM

Re: Paper Chapel Bleeding
 
Wow!

Rocketqueen 08-24-2006 01:38 PM

Re: Paper Chapel Bleeding
 
thank you man it was awsome reading that hell of a strong writing too :jam: :jam:


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