New Poem I wrote
 

Hey everyone this is a new poem I wrote, what ya think? :)

Her mystery in the deep sea of her eyes
as beautiful and forgiven as pink tulips
being showered on a rainy day followed by
sunlight that takes away their secret
The reflection of her mystery is thrown back
into my soul devouring the senseless speculation
The breeze is calm for a moment, its cool tips
intense its devious trail fortifying
the quiet sound of the night
All that's left is the stars in her eyes
irradiating into my soul, chanting the inaudible
melodious that penetrates my ears
Her words are harmonic sounds, that gently brush my ears
as her voice is a musical sound from Heaven
My vigor is born, my strength confines its truth
Her heart is true, its expression are beyond affection
No other sound, voice, soul, flesh could emulate her truth
It's beyond comprehension in which someday my heart will know

enjoyed reading that...descriptive and seems to be written for someone very special...thank you for sharing it with us...:)

:cloud9: That Freaking Rocked :jam:

that was awesome!

Thank you all for the sweet opinions :) didnt think the poem was that good

well i thought it was kick ass and when i say its kick ass its kick ass :D

Yea, Ta knows what she is talking about. :D

You Know So :D