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MrSeeker 04-21-2004 03:10 AM

Somthing new just for you!
 
The Hate Song
"I dont feel like myself,I havent for a while
Havent shown some happiness or even a small smile
Ever since you broke my heart in two
I havent been able to stop thinking about you
Im dried of tears, been crying too long
Twisting myself apart because you're gone

Kisses,they burn
This lesson,I'll learn
To never trust again
Been burnt by my so called friend

You're tearing apart my insides,Im trying to stay strong
But you've been tearing me limb from limb all along
I wish I could hold you to tell you how much I hate you
I wish I could scold you just as bad as you did me too
Hold you in my arms only to drop you to the ground
Cover your lips only for you never to make another sound

Hugs,they crush me
Your beauty,so ugly
The fire that still burned
The lesson I never learned."

New site: http://www.angelfire.com/punk4/writingsofinsanity I am
Bleeding Love. Enjoy

creedsister 04-21-2004 12:37 PM

I liked the first line

MrSeeker 04-21-2004 08:21 PM

Yea,sorry. This is my emo stuff coming out.(i hate emo!!!!) Better Off Dead,Released and some others are my harder roots,so stay tuned to the newsletter.
Later

creedsister 04-21-2004 09:36 PM

I cant wait seeks

Creed_Defaultgirl 05-01-2004 12:16 AM

Cool man! I always like to read your poems. Really emotional.

MrSeeker 05-02-2004 12:34 AM

Thanks :D


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