With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
 

With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred

let your words rot on your tongue
with your mouth like a gun

armed and dangerous
sick and contagious

shots go off, our bodies cave
no one understands the gifts you gave
gifts of lead and weightless conversation
with no better act of betrayal than of penetration
the body bleeds and out forms misery

lead me not into temptation
lead me not into damnation

(for the words i take in vain
just may leave others slain).

Re: With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
 

it was fun to read it.........short but good......... thanks for posting dude!

Re: With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
 

thanks :)

Re: With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
 

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Well, I can see it derived from pain - I'm sorry about that. Overall, it is a great poem with lots of meaning and emotion.

Re: With A Mouth Like A Shotgun and A Barrel Full of Hatred
 

Thank you. :)