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titan9 05-31-2006 09:52 AM

Will You?
 
Well, I decided to finally put up some song lyrics here. :D

"Will You"©
Lyrics by: Titan9

Verse 1:
Here I am in my prison
I have finally reached my darkest day
Living my life any longer is no given
How did I lose my way?
So long ago I was happy
I felt I had everything
But then it all came crashing down
Like a summer rain
Now my anguish surrounds me
All I feel is sadness, anger and pain
And I can't see the reason I'm alive
And I can't go on like this any longer
They say
"What doesn't kill you, only makes you stronger"
But I don't feel that strength

Chorus:
My life is completely shattered
And I have nothing left to lose
This life has left me battered
Broken and bruised
So I get down on my knees
I cry out to you
Will you take me back?
Despite my lack of faith
Will you forgive the past?
And give me the strength
To make it through?

Verse 2:
I wake up to a new day
The sun shines so bright
Still, I feel exactly the same
I know that this life isn't right
I'm still trying to figure out just how I got this way
What mistake could I have possibly made
To feel so much pain?
This sinking feeling never fades
There is no relief for me
I just can't do this anymore
I can't continue to shut every door
And isolate myself even more form the outside

*Chorus*

Bridge:
This is finally it
I can't go on like this
I surrender myself to you
I can't do this all by myself
I need you to get me through
And save me from this personal hell
Take me
Just take me!

*Chorus*

metalchris25 05-31-2006 10:23 AM

Re: Will You?
 
Very Nice! I would love to hear some music to that.

titan9 05-31-2006 10:40 AM

Re: Will You?
 
Thanks! As for hearing some music to that, that'll happen once I actually get good at guitar. :D

nagpo 05-31-2006 09:08 PM

Re: Will You?
 
damn good

Rocketqueen 06-03-2006 01:07 AM

Re: Will You?
 
:jam: :jam: loved it, well written very well written NAGPO I Just Caught Your New Signature :D :D :D Man !!!! i swear i dont know about it :D


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