The Calling
 

On the edge of six feet down
Clutches marker words of stone
Doesn’t understand the why
Never could now can’t atone

Little boy blue is lost on you
Doesn’t follow unspoken rules
Cannot be the man so young
Open scorn a hatred fueled

Abandoned child left to fly
Little Mary he dared to cry
Ridiculed for spine so weak
Secret garden gets him high

Donning robe of black and white
Forced to swallow head held tight
Can’t confess now must suppress
Watches father bless the night

On the edge of six feet down
Clutches rope why cast in stone
Hears the angels call for him
Surrenders now to world unknown

Soooo?

:confused:

Very very deep. Really thought provoking.

Alright, the lyric was okay, but I like Stapp lyrics more than Alex's. (Alex Band = front man in The Calling). After all, this is a Creed board.

It's just a title for my poem, extreme lithium. It has nothing to do the band The Calling. And this is the Creative Corner forum where people can post their creative musings.

Oh, sorry... The funny thing about it is that Alex could've wrote it, his lyrics often kind of seem like... That! :D Well the lyric were... Well, good. I better check here often, maybe I could post a lyric of mine.

(Call me Lith).

LOL, well, thanks, Lith, I think ;)...I really don't know many of The Calling's songs. I'll have to check them out some more.

Yeah, actually you're a little mini-Alex! :D I'm more like a mini-Stapp! :smokin:

Hehehehe...you should post some of your stuff here. It's fun to read what's going on in other people's heads.

Of course I will! :D I'll just check my PM first! :D

Another great one by Dogstar! That was deep, as Teri said.

Thanks, you guys!!

well lord bless me,,whats that got to do with anything I loved Dogstars poem,,It was Deep :)

Another wonderful poem Kerri! :clap: