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Blind Faith
Would that I had seen the signs
Of waning interest repeating lines Didn’t care to look your way Blind I turned so silent stayed River of tears soaked you through A callous heart revealed to you Struck you down, breath it stole Left you drained and turned you cold Birthday passed a thoughtless gift Given to mend a growing rift Nonchalant she let you fall Thunder clapping hit the wall Medicated mind you craved Fed desire long depraved Self-inflicted wound you drew Indifference wasn’t lost on you Would that I had seen the signs Of waning interest tired eyes Didn’t care to look your way Forever now am bound to pay |
:clap: :clap: AWESOME! I love it Kerri!
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Yes, I can relate. That's my fave of yours so far.
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Another good one Dogstar
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Thanks a bunch, you guys :)
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I agree, that's my favorite of yours. I can feel the pain completely.
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:clap: very good!!!
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Emotions.....wow! That Was Great!
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Thanks!!!
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Great poem, Dogstar!!:clap: :clap:
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Awesome poem Kerri :D
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I'm a few days late but...WOW
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