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Tragedy in The Making
Tragedy in The Making
I will not accept failure like I've accepted this disease One day at a time I'll bring this to it's knees With deception in my heart, everything falls Rotting from inside to breach the walls Tragedy in the making My heart is breaking Disposing the guilt And the walls I built My heart bleeds out the lies I've choked upon Unveiling the truth of a life lived all wrong The sun breaks the horizon and paints the sky red Just as my heart when I was dead I was slain to the past Just like the shadow I cast But I live despite my design And now victory is mine. |
:jam: i liked it
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I really would be interested to see what you could come up with w/o the simple rhymes. They just suffocate the piece.
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Ask Torn Signs (Kim). She likes my none rhyming stuff more than rhyming. To Me writing without rhyme is pointless, but I have done it several times. I will go look to find them and post them just for you. <3
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